Monday, January 13, 2014

Computer Poem

This poem is based off the earlier discussions about reality.
It's written in Python, which in this case is a computer code, not a snake. In case that wasn't clear. :-P
Thanks to Nelnah-Fish, my amazing sister, for helping me write in a language I don't speak. :-)
Hopefully the image works. If not, let me know.
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7 comments:

  1. Oh my everloving God, Fabi

    That was so amazing.

    Holy Hera...

    I'm going to save this and print it out. When I meet you, you are going to sign it, and I will frame it.
    It's just- the emotions of a "non-emotional" device..

    It's really raw, and I dig that.

    Just

    Wow.
    *Hugs*
    *Whispers*
    AlsoIfeellikethisalotandyoucaptureditperfectlythisisamazing

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  2. O_O That's amazing.

    You know when things are horrible in a good way, like writing that's really sad? It was like that. :) :) :)

    It really makes you think, and stuff. :/

    And the end is really chilling. And it's like . . . in Drama, we had this short story, and it was written in the past but set in the future, and these kids had to go and do tests, like every child had to do these tests, and the story focused on this little boy called Peter, and he was really inquisitive and asked why the sky was blue and why the grass was green and that, and when it was his birthday, he went off to do this test, and he did really well on it, so he was killed, because he was too intelligent. Just killed right there, by a gas or whatever that the computer doing the test gave out.
    And it's just like . . .
    Idk, it reminded me of that. :)

    Plus it's really :O how the emotions add up. Like, which emotions.
    And the 'caring' thing. :'(

    And if you ever think that you're not awesome, I want you to think back to this poem and it's amazing unique effectiveness and realise that even if you weren't you (even though you are you, and you're amazing), you would still be awesome because of this poem. :)

    *hugs*

    #ChaseForBookNine

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    1. [hugs]

      ...

      When I post a poem, I put a piece of my soul in it, and then I'm always scared that people won't understand it. Here, especially, since it was in code.

      I'm glad you found meaning in it.

      [hugs Star, Adra, Snow and anyone else who reads the poem]

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